I used to think Benjamin Franklin was a very boring fellow, but now, after reading this book, I have noticed that he was actually quite an interesting man. Did you know that Franklin invented the lightning rod, the Franklin Stove, AND the battery?
Visualizing, I could feel how mad Benjamin felt when he went on a ship with a permit to buy his printing equipment and then, when he got to England, it was invalid! Benjamin was also really good at making meaningful quotations. Some of my favorite are "a rolling stone gathers no moss" and "boy that can give up essential liberty, to obtain a little safety, deserves neither liberty nor safety."
When I got to the part in the book about the Franklin Stove, I was also amazed about how Franklin was able to put a stove and a fireplace all in one, AND make it better all stoves and batteries at the time.
I think this is a great book that YOU should read.
Sincerely,
George
Here is my vocaroo for reading fluency, I couldn't hear it when I tried to listen to it, so it might not work.
Enjoy!
My vocaroo!
12 comments:
Good discriptive sentences and i see you like benjamin franklin but you didnt focus on the book,Harrisen
George, I really like how you used quotes,since they are very discribtive.
good job... you clearly explained your visualizations and thinking. and those are some good quotes, but the second one is kinda hard to understand. sabine
George i really like how you kept adding onnections lie i liked this quote by him......
The second quotation had to do with the American Revoloution.
Even though you could go deeper in the onion, but I really enjoyed reading your book response and I was very inpresed on your characters mood.
I thought it was interesting how you used specific quotes, and how you said your opinion about the quotes.
Nice skills I liked how you u used two quotes bye him.You also started I used to think Benjamin Franklin was a very boring fellow, but now, after reading this book, I have noticed that he was actually quite an interesting man. an don't start with I in a sentence.
I like your first couple of sentences they made me laugh, but you should put your book responce into paragraph.You can also tell us why you like the qutes you like.
Good job, George. I think it was an interesting book response. You didn't really use any GRAAB, SSS or sentence fluency ssentences, though. A tip for next time: Try and go deeper into the onion.
I agree with Camille. You should say WHY you like the quote maybe, but all in all it was an interesting book response and you obviously put work into it.
Everybody, please use correct english.
It is a quotation, not a quote.
Thanks,
George!
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